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Prompt 2
Most people are so impressed by facts and objectivity that they do not appreciate the use of imagination. They worry that our imaginations get us away from reality, distort our views and perspectives, and, worst of all, are unscientific. As a result, using our imagination and other related activities such as appreciating art or music or being creative are often considered the "frosting"—the nice extras in life—rather than vital pursuits that are crucial to everyone.
Adapted from Rollo May, The Courage to Create
Assignment: Is imagination less valuable than facts and objectivity? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.
Facts and objectivity are never less valuable than imagination. To find facts and objectivity the person who discovered them obviously had to have imagination. Where do scientists get their answers from? Their drive also comes from their imagination therefore facts and objectivity would be no where without the imagination behind it.
Albert Einstein discovered all these amazing formulas that now have become facts and equations, but to find all of them he had to have had an idea. And to have this idea it was crucial to have imagination. Imagination led Einstein to have a thought which then turned into an idea which then turned into mathematical research and then turned into a math equation that has now been condemned a fact.
When your imagination creates a picture in your head and you prominently remember it, you are more likely to keep designing on it. That’s how most people design inventions. Mostly out of need, people’s imaginations lead them to create inventions such as the car, telegraph and vacuum cleaner. When traveling large distances from horses got too tedious and trains became more expensive then they should be then cars became a more practical idea. Because of the invention of the car, horses were kept at home and weren’t forced to travel long miles in the heat and dust, without water and food. When sending mail through the pony express became to time-consuming people created the telegraph, which sent the pony express right out of service. The telegraph could send messages over wires in minutes what a pony rider could do in days. Though many jobs were lost many new opportunities were opened up. When carpets were installed people began to realize that they would need a way to clean up their carpets to hinder infections and dust mites. Some genius out there then had the idea for a vacuum cleaner. It was initially probably huge but just like computers, which shrunk over time, we have gone from huge vacuums with disposable bags to handheld vacuums lighter than a mop with a reusable dirt cup. All devices that we use were once just thoughts in someone’s head. And everything that is just a fact today was made in someone’s imagination yesterday.
Imagination also keeps a mind healthy and sane. If we all had numbers and equations to work with we would all be clones of each other. But because we have imaginations e have personalities and because we have personalities we have change. Some people are just there while others really try to make a difference. If we did not try to make a difference then we would not have democracy or the idea of freedom. We would be under no government at all.
Imagination is important to create facts and objectivity. If we had no imagination we would get nowhere in life.